Reviews for Gods in Training
808b2uty chapter 27 . 10/29/2012
Please update! This story is amazing!
Dianakingdomhearts chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
Hello! Omg I just started reading your story and I love it! XD Ha ha I love the interaction between Thantos and Blade! I have a question though, have you ever read the Percy Jackson books series before? _
CharissaKarn chapter 27 . 10/21/2012
:) i like it! :) so happy to read more! :) aha and i'll be looking forward to reading more, when you have time of course! :D
redandwhitetigers chapter 27 . 10/21/2012
Now the war begins.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 27 . 10/21/2012
AMazing chapter! This will be interesting... I really hope you update soon, because I don't like cliffies. :(
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
MoonlightInTheMist chapter 26 . 10/18/2012
Yeesh, everyone is making such a big deal out of this. They're blowing it WAY out of proportion.
redandwhitetigers chapter 26 . 10/17/2012
I love the last line!
"Do you want a grape? I guarantee their freshness."
Classic!
Update soon!
CharissaKarn chapter 26 . 10/14/2012
:D YEEEE this is awesome! :) I like Demi! :) ahah please update soon! :)
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 26 . 10/14/2012
Great chapter! Haha I love the last line! The situation's all dark and then he just has this bowl of grapes and ... LOL
Keep up the awesome work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
MoonlightInTheMist chapter 25 . 10/11/2012
I liked this chapter a lot. the characters were so original. Thanks for switching Isis to Iris, by the way...
kc1690 chapter 25 . 10/10/2012
Wow! Janus is extremely annoying! And I love Khione! And Iris, though Rainbows is what she does, she seems feisty! Can't wait to see how they handle going to hell...
Guest chapter 25 . 10/8/2012
i love this story penguins rock
CharissaKarn chapter 25 . 10/8/2012
teehee! i love it! :D this is awesome! ahahaha :D please update again, soon! :D
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 25 . 10/8/2012
Haha awesome chapter! I love the whole thing with Janus and the choices and such... XD
The only thing is, I noticed that you use the words "said" and "asked" a lot; maybe you could find more descriptive words like that. In stead of "asked", you could do "questioned" or "demanded" or "enquired" or maybe "wondered"... for "said", you could do "replied" (which I think you use), "responded", "declared", "expounded" which is like "explained", there are so many new options! XD wow I sound like my English teacher. *shudders*
Anyway, keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
redandwhitetigers chapter 25 . 10/8/2012
I did not see Khione be a little girl. Didn't see it, but I did see Iris being tougher than you would think.
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