|Reviews for h a p p i n e s s|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
"wash it, make it a pleasing/scent."... I didn't love this line because I don't usually associate smell with wash whereas the other ones really fit together so well.
Other than that I loved the piece. I loved the tone. And I really liked the concept too of how we all pretend to be happy but sometimes we need to just be sad. I think you described it beautifully and uniquely. Great job.
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