I'm hoping so bad that Ryah will swoop in and save her from all this

Errrr, major parenting fail!

Great story! Please continue!

Argh the angst is killing me! I loved Ryah so much in this chapter though

The whole time I was reading this I was just like 'No Cora no'. I never thought this would happen omg

I had to go back and re-read this chapter because damn...this is amazing. Your writing is excellent and you capture their emotions so well. I really hope you update soon!

Wow this story is amazing so far! I love it. I need to read more like right now

Ho-ly shit.

Yes! You are back!
Here is the error I saw In chapter 8: Cora shrugged and shook her head slightly. "I don't know. I ever met him... It should be 'never.'

The obvious thing to do would have been for Cora to go to her mother with the camera and all the information that her teacher had gathered on Andrew. Story does not seem logical, you know?

Don't tell me your abandoning this story I actually love your writing so please update soon. :)

Finally a night without Rick and Andrew. They. Sexed a break from them. I'm glad Corah is on her mom about her as*hole boyfriend and I'm glad that Corah called Ryah. I do believe I see the makings of a romance forming ;). Great chapter, I liked it a lot.

I like Ryah now, I'm a believer in the teacher! Ha that was corny of me. Andrew scares the sh*t out of me and he's a fictional character. Corah's mom really misses me off. Seriously if I was Corah I would take Jaycee with me when I went to college. Fight for custody or something because she can't stay in that house with them. Great story so far!

Andrew is one sick mother fu*ker. Seriously who does that kind of sh*t. I must applaud you in making characters that are so realistic. So far I really like the story.

I think it's good that Corah has someone looking out for her but at the same time I'm my sure what to think about Ryah. I do know that Andrew and his dad are huge dicks though.