Reviews for The Broken Mess
MysteriousFire chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
I like this one-shot!
First, your writing style is really appealing I think. I didn't have to make an effort to read on once, so it's really good, it didn't get boring.
About the content, I love their discussion. I sometimes have a Meg and a Olive in my head I think. But I love the conclusion Meg makes.
Very good!
KrissieAnaMaureen chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
This is really cute! It carries a very interesting moral that a lot of us seem to forget. I enjoyed it a lot. I like Olive. Sadly, most of the time, I would end up agreeing with Meg because I’m not always that hopeful.
Bob-The-Rock chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Damn... it's been ages since I've logged in here. Even longer since I've actually reviewed anything.

And you did this in two periods? That is actually VERY good. I spent the first two periods WE had chatting to people on the computer; people who were on the other side of the CLASSROOM. Good times, good times...

Anyways, it is overall a FANTASTICALLY FANTASTIC piece and I love eeeeeeeeeet! (yup, loss of grammar right there).

And the way you told me made it seem really cheesy, but it isn't! I swears it.

ONE DAY WE SHALL CHANGE THE WORLD.