|Reviews for Inhuman ParadiseThe Poem|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I like this piece a lot. I think your word choices create a really great tone. I also like how it starts with him, then her and then them together. It had a nice flow of like a story almost. The rhyming was nice too. It had a nice flow without sounding forced at all. Nice job.
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| SnowstormsInMay chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
This is very interesting and beautifully written. It's open to be interpreted different ways.