Reviews for broken promises
Ivy Climbroe chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
This is beautifully written..
Wonder46 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Really nice poem!
MADdreamers chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
This is great and really creative. I like how you formatted the poem, it emphasized certain words or points. Great job! I have a question you don't have to answer though, why are the words in italics and broken important? I'm curious of your muse. It's so interesting.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I really loved this piece and I think my heart just sunk a little lower, it was that powerful. I loved it and I think it's a great piece - promise (see what I did there ;)) me you won't edit this. Love, love, love, love, loved this piece :)
LoveBambi16 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
This poem is really powerful! It also gives it a really haunting feeling to it. I think it's beautiful. Keep it up!
Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Amazing I loved this, and the way it was written seemed to work perfectly.