Reviews for Why Me?
Rapture's Hold chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
It's good. I hope to read more on this soon.
Anxious Axolotl chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
This story has some interesting elements, I'm very intrigued by the mysterious man in black, but I think a lot of the other elements are quite cliche. In particular the fight with her dad when she returns home from school. It's not bad writing, not by far, I just wonder if the abuse could be less overt, like her father never being home or never coming out of his room or something (if didn't affect the plot, of course.).

I was a little confused by the line [Class ended and Juliet walked out of the class after picking her books up off the floor because someone decided to do so.]. Someone decided to do what exactly? Also, don't forget to start a new line for every turn of dialogue. It will make your formatting beautiful!

I hope you keep up with this story and that the following chapters are a little longer. Keep it up!