I've decided I really enjoy your writing! You only have two stories though, it's a shame! Do you write anywhere else?

I think the stories have an almost realistic feel, like they're realistic in the way that they are characterized but idk if this could actually happen in real life. Either way, I like your characterization of characters, and although Camille seems kind of extreme, that is certainly realistic. Alli and Chris were absolutely adorable!
Keep up the lovely writing(:

I thought I misread it when it said Arkansas because I live there and it's weird seeing in a story because nobody ever talks about it, lol. But this was so cute! I loved it!

Awwkk... That was cute, it just took them four years though xD

OH EM GEE THAT WAS FREAKING A-DOR-A-BLAYYYY! AHHHH A YEAR! OVER ONE WHOLE YEAR! DO YOU KNOW THE UTTER AGONY THAT I WAS FORCED TO SURVIVE WHILE WAITING FOR THIS?! YOU OWE ME MORE, BUTT!
ahem. now for the actual review. :D
so liiiiiike you had a lot of capitals after quotations, such as: "'What kind of skirts have pockets?' He'd ("h" should be lowercase) asked relentlessly, - (should be period here) 'Only pants are supposed to have pockets!'"
btdubs i totes loves that line. ahahaha chris is a cutieeee and you used jordan! like jordan and perry! hehehe
i like alli and her pocket-skirts. muy chic ;)
well there were a bunch of minor mistakes with like the quotation marks and commas/periods/capitals before and after but that's okay, nothing big. there was this one sentence where i think a word was missing or something...lemme see
AHA! "'With Alli's help!'" [P]iped up (should be lowercase p) Camille, grinning sadistically as [Jordan's] (you mean Chris right? because they didn't just openly tell Jordan that Camille is planning to seduce him...DID THEY?) eyes popped out of his head. She ignored her best friend's blatant glare."
ALSO...
"'You know he's totally into you, right? And you're totally into him too. Why don't you just jump his bones already?'
'No.'
'That's not an answer you bitch- you know, he was totally checking you out.'"
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! YOU ROCK MY SOCKS (whatever that means) AND WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER SEND ME SOME OF YOUR SKILLZ THROUGH EMAIL GOSHNESS WOMAN
anyways. i'm working on my tumblr4 oneshot! i know exactly what's gonna happen buuuuut i have to wake up early tomorrow for an early shift at the library so i need to sleep now. :( boo.
kthxbai love yaaaa
and i really need to come up with some bad nicknames for your peeps. like cereally. :P