|Reviews for The Wedding Gone Wrong|
| AmericanBeauty-AmericanPsycho chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Well you definitely know how to make a hook! You have a great hook in the beginning as well as one at the end. That will keep your readers reading!
Also, I have never read a story that has the MC or the person telling the story at such a young age and it made me want to read on and see how you would manage to do that. You did well.
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| HSH chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I recommend you do a grammar check of this as well as explain more especially about Lilly's relationship with Emily. Why are they friends when they are years apart? Why don't her parents know Emily that well? How did they meet? How are they so good of friends that she gets invited to her wedding?