Reviews for A Not So Hideous Birthday
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I liked this. The ending was really funny. Though it might take longer than 30 minutes by the time the fire department clears the building and everything.

I liked how you personified the bad girl. Making it seem like she doesn't care about her friends birthday when really she does. I also like how you show how important the friend is and the influence she's had on the narrator.

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