Reviews for Close Encounters
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I just read another piece with the same prompt.. lol. It's funny how completely different they are.

I do like this though. I think you did a great job of describing the tension between them. I also liked the last line. It makes the reader even more curious about what Alex was really doing. It also shows how in situations like that people overlook really obvious things. Nicely done.

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CosmosSurfer chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
AH! That was scary! I would hate to be Becca or Alex.

Good job!

CS