Reviews for The Wise Man
Red Rose Black Ink chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
"No, that Answer's a bit too vague. Although it does start to make some sense with a bit of deep thought." I love this! It could be profound, but at the same time it could be the sort of thing I say when I want to sound profound. :-J
The story builds nicely, with the "answer" making no sense at first and then its meaning slowly coming to light, and the level of detail is just right- we can picture the scene without being overwhelmed by setting description that has no effect on the story.
My only nitpick on word choice: "his mind hurled itself back to a time..." I don't really like this, but then I can't think of anything better.
Also, thanks for reminding me about Portal! I promised a friend I'd try it and keep forgetting...
PureHeartsWait chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Great job!