Reviews for Waiting
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This is poem is very lovely poem, and worded in such an inimitable way. Amazing, keep it up :D
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I feel like in the lines where you have '_', that the comma should be inside the '. I like the repetition. It worked well with the piece and I think switching it up with that last line was good. It's a sweet relateable poem. Makes the reader wonder more about the relationship.

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