|Reviews for Vegan butter cake|
| dokidokipanic chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
true bout the man wantin dat bounce!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I sort of got confused with who the narrator was. Is the our and we you and this girl chelsea (who is the herself in the third stanza) or is chelsea the narrator and the our is just chelsea and the reflection? Or is chelsea different and the our is the narrator and the mirror? I just sort of got confused...
I did like the piece though. I thought that last line was really powerful. I also liked the second stanza. It's a really powerful phrase and so against what a lot of people would say. I also liked the paragraph after that because it's a totally different take on why thin isn't beautiful. Not the typical it's inside beauty that counts.
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| YasuRan chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
The images of starving - in every sense of the word - young girls in the modelling industry are what comes to mind as I read this. Stark and riveting.