|Reviews for My Last Breath|
| Grimpeddler chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Aw, chilling content. I really love the rhyme scheme, and it's a wonderful poem. The meter seems off to me, but maybe I'm just not reading it right. It might help if you edited the syllable count and meter, but only if you want to.
| love971 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Beautiful. I love the last stanza. Made me cry.