Heeey, not fair-cliff-hanger! This is so awesome-I love the way this is written. I love the style-light, informal, enjoyable, gripping. It was a really good read, although, in my opinion, I think it could've ended differently-it's still got potential different endings, so maybe some other avenues could be explored. But, other than that, I love the topic you've chosen, and the way you've written it. Really good job. -

R. K. Iris.

This is really good, I love the detail you've used! It's making me shiver, and it's a good thing it's not late at night right now. I hope you continue this, it's really good.!

WHOA AWESOME CONTINUE I LOVE IT!