Lovely story!

I love your interpretation of this classic story and think you write exceptionally well. I look forward to reading all your stories as well as watching a very talented writer expand your storytelling and writing abilities as you grow as a writer.

You have a very vivid imagination and great storytelling.

I wish you had an English speaking beta. Many of your words choices come off as juvenile and inappropriate both for the time period and social stature of your characters. I ultimately found it so distracting that I had to stop reading.

I'm sorry - I wish I could sign in, but I'm in a foreign country with some weird ass spell-check, so I'm not even going to attempt it. Your summary is super intriguing, especially after I read chapter 1. I can tell you're putting spins on it!

Dedrick*

Derek is a fuck boy ! He's being such a douche

Dedrick is a ..., ugly word, ugly word, jerk.

What a jerk.

Great story!

Aw, so sweet. I definitely enjoyed your story. Thank you so much for posting. I do love a happy ending romance. :)

This story was beautifully written. Especially considering you mentioned that English isn't your first language! And high five for not making this basically sex driven. I get so tired of rated M stories being written with excessive M content. Your use was perfectly necessary and put the cherry on top of a lovely cake. I'd eat it again but it's already finished! But I love me some resolution, so I'm glad I read the whole thing. :)

I just read your entire story and it was amazing! I loved it, you're an amazing writer, and I cant wait to read more of your work

Great story!

OMG I loved this I wish it was a book D
And keep up the good work my friend

A very adorable story. I quite enjoyed it. Romantic and yet not lewd in any sense. Your grasp of the English language, despite not being your home, is something to be envied.