|Reviews for Snow on a Winter's Night|
| classic violet chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I really relate to this poem. So much. Beautiful imagery as well. I love everything about this poem.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I like this piece. I think your imagery is really great and original. I especially loved that first stanza. The only thing is some parts seemed a bit repetitious like "Much more special than I/For I am nothing special," and "Only it's all lies, all of it." It just seemed a bit wordy in places.
I did like the intentional repletion and the end though. It flowed nicely and I liked the play on words with that last line.
I also like this mysterious you. It lets the reader decide who this person is to you which I always like.
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