Reviews for To Run
GlimpseTheMoon chapter 1 . 4/6
I also run track and cross country and really love this poem, especially "You can love or like or hate to run, but you must not ever fear it".
I did notice that sometimes you seemed to have a little trouble getting your words to fit the metre of the poem, but overall I thought it was very good, particularly the imagery.
iamnolongerusingthisaccount chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I like the idea of this poem but it was a bit hard to stay focused in places. Try breaking the piece up a little and it will flow better as you read.