|Reviews for The Queen of a Pharaoh|
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/6/2012
Nice story! Your grammar was a bit bad but it was still understandable.
Also I noticed: is the pharaoh Yami Yugi from yo-gi-oh? Because when I realized it I started laughing! And if it is great idea! Please update soon!
| YukariHina chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
What a great chapter, but i think you need to look up for your grammar..
Kepp Writting okay
| chiisutofupuru chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
so far you have caught my intrest, i did have to read some things twice to understand but it was very readable (if it was in first person it wouldn't really matter, it would just add more to the character)
I will be back to read more
(oh ya, i was too lazy to log in but you can check out my stories under this name)