Hey! I like this. Are you ever going to finish it? I know it hasn't been updated in a while but it doesn't say abandoned and your profile has been updated more recently so I figured I would ask

god bless emails i know your last update was in 2014 but i really love the Story beside the cutting violet says things and writes things on her diary that i feel like i wrote them

Wow, so. I love it!
For some reason I expect Violet to get rid of Collin, soon. I know it won't happen right now but.. I mean, besides how they got together, sex and the love for videogames, they have nothing really in common. And this far, i don't think Collin knows her at all. I dont really think Violets knows herself truly. She is still only 20... and the only one wanting to get to know her is Eli.
I wonder if Violet ever felt happy with Collin. She felt comforted, right. Because he got her willing to stay away from other people... thou, he got her wrong on her dislike for them.
Anyway, Im hoping for another chapter soon.
Great plot.
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Hey there.. i like the diary entries.. and thinking that its a step better than when Vio suddenly get the attention of so many people at once. As if Clay mediating Vio into her social life. I dont know but it feels weird for me. Perhaps i just need to read more to find out?

This was so good. I just started reading it today and I'm already hooked.
I do hope you'll be able to post another chapter soon 3

Please right another chapter of "Panic Prone".

Loving This Story

I hope you continue this story. I like the short doses of Violet's wit and her life. And Eli to me is such a sweetheart.

I really like this story. I'm wondering why it doesn't have a lot of reviews. Personally, I like the whole chill aspect of this fic.

You're a very good writer. I am impressed with your imagery and descriptions. This is a great story. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you come up with!

Oh and I forgot to mention Eli's letter. So tragic. I thought it was really well-written advice, something real and genuinely thought out and would actually apply in real life.

Aha they're in their twenties! I think that was a good introduction, I liked the abruptness in the change of pace.
I still feel sorry for Violet though -her cutting makes things so much worse..I know that being twenty isn't as great as I thought it would be, so many responsibilities. The story of her life really has unfolded around her, I hope she becomes more active in her decisions soon!

This is actually haunting...your characters feel like real people. Violet is so real...I feel like her diary entries are so personal, they allow the reader to connect with her. I feel like Eli must have felt. Her story about going to the dance alone was definitely my favourite...it seemed so positive. The fact that she was dreaming about when she was eighty and in love made me smile for her!
Your other characters are also interesting. Violet's mom for example...her story is so sad! And I like how you keep slipping Kenya in...she feels important to the future of the plot somehow. And I'm not sure how I feel about Collin. I'll wait to form a final opinion of him!
Now that the story has turned full circle, and we are back to the beginning with Eli's kiss, I'm wondering when you'll get to describing them in their twenties? I love their high school drama and I'm interested in how you'll convey their twenties.

I feel so sorry for her. Reading her diary entries make me sad.

Thank you for updating!

Congratulations, you've actually made me read a non-slash fiction! I started reading this story, thinking it would be slash like "Fade Into You", and even after I realized my mistake, I kept on reading. I don't know why, but for some reason I never really got into online het-fiction, maybe because it's even more difficult to find the few gems among the piles of trash than it is for slash (a difficult enough endeavour already). But I'm glad I made that mistake, because I really like Violet and how her relationship with Collin, and Eli, unfolds. I'm also really curious how the situation in the first chapter will come to pass in "real time", although I really hope nobody (Collin in particular) dies for that to happen...

Anyway, looking forward to future chapters of both Wallflower and Fade (which I also really, really like but am too lazy to review at the moment)!