Reviews for The Burn Files: The Olympic Fire
KiwiHunch chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Lovely! I love them all-Especially Riley and Jenny. They just, to me, have such loveable personalities. I absolutely loved Jenny's correction to Jack, he deserved that, darn it. Score one for team Woman! Whoot! And also a congratulations to her for being the only woman there! I sense an independent girl going on ;D
Oh, Riley. I think I fell in love with him because he is, presumably, the youngest, and there's something about his air, albeit he might be slightly cocky, that just makes you want to claim him as yours before anyone else does!
I haven't seen a plot like this in a long time, and you're carrying it very well, might I add, so please, do update soon!