|Reviews for The Phoenix|
| servatis-a-pereculum chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
Yay for rhyming!
| Kolostramin Indincranin chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Not brilliant, but very good. Very, very good. I wish I could write poetry like that. And this was in 7th grade? And you haven't revised it? Holy dung, person, you are good at this sort of the phoenix flies,Koin
| Atlantian Dragoness chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
I really enjoyed this poem. Usually, ryhming doesn't fit my taste, but you fit all of the words perfectly in your writing.
| Relffin chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
really good, but on line...well whatever line it is, it says something like: one of kind, loney it flies. I kind of get confused. Maybe you meant; one of a kind. Anyway it was really good.
| Polgara The Sorceress chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Beautiful! Really. I thought it was a great poem. The way you described things, and the sentence fluency. It was all just wonderful! Great job! Keep up the good work!
| PhoenixWings chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
Oh My God, I've never read such a good phoenix poem. So insipational and powerful. In one word AMAZING! I LOVE phoenixes!
| Dragoness chapter 1 . 10/26/2002
*_* I have to say this, second to dragons, the phoenixes are my favorite creatures...And yes I use the plural because there are many..and only one..and...stuff? Drat, I lost it. *-_-*; Well...I think you captured them/it quite beautifully...I only wish my parents hadn't interrupted the flow in the middle, but it was still beautiful all the same. *_*;;; I have much else to read..Tat's all..*_*;
| Snow5 chapter 1 . 5/30/2002
This is such a beautiful poem! You're amazing for you age, girl! xxx _
| Sabrinacharmer chapter 1 . 5/19/2002
Wow! I remember this! i believe i did a $ucky one on a wolf but...that'z not the point :) anyway great poem, i forgot how good it was. Of course this waz like in the 5th grade or sumtin like dat lol! anyway good good! by the way what'z an Igglybuff award doohickie? anyway e-mail me. c-ya :)
| Baka-Chan4 chapter 1 . 4/12/2002
I've read it so many times and it's STILL wonderfull.
| Firecomet chapter 1 . 4/11/2002
WHOOOAAAAAA! That's so pretty! **prints it out to hang it up on 'er wall** I wish I could write pretty stuff like that... Keep up the good work! n.-v
| Jessiekat chapter 1 . 3/18/2002
WOW. I loved that. I sincerely hope you got an A or I have a teacher to kill. XD I luffed that ... it goes on my favourites. As do you! ;P
| BeautifulWickedness chapter 1 . 2/27/2002
Ooo, I like this poem! Great imagery, very nice! _ Thanx for the reviews! Rock on my fellow vegetarian! All my friends think I'm nuts and my family didn't think I'd stick with it, but I've been vegan for about 3 years now! Cows are just so much cooler than nasty, greasy cheeseburgers! Luv ya!
| maiden of rohan chapter 1 . 2/13/2002
Great poem, Kristen! Is this the one that was published? Keep writing, never stop!
| plazmah chapter 1 . 12/12/2001
Wow, that was really good. I've always like the phoenix.