wow. nice! I like this

beautiful, absolutely inspired! I have often stayed up till 4am and let me tell you, thats when i write my best poetry!

XD Dude! That wrecks

hummm. makes me think here. cool! ~tara~

You need a nap.

Cute! It has a Shel Silverstein flair, but retains the thin thread of melancholy that runs through the backdrop of all your work. A wonderful touch was the repetition in the last line-it still made a comprehensible sentence, but it echoed the twisted, tangled thought patterens (that make sense to the thinker, but no one else) produced when one HAS been thinking too much. I know how it feels to wake up in the middle of the night with your mind full. But I can't put it into such wonderful language as you. That is the difference between a writer and a "WriterInTraining" (which should be my screen name).

staying up till 4am isn't good for you. there's never anyone to talk to. trust me, i know. but its great for being alone and enjoying it. trust me, i know.