uruwashii desu, ne?

The fact that I cannot fully understand it makes it enchanting. It reminds me of songs that tease me, ending right as I need more.

This is so great! It's hard to understand poetry sometimes when it's very short, but I had no problem with yours. You have an interesting style, it's something new and different to me. I hope that you continue writing, if this is a true example of your work you are terrific!