Reviews for The Coffee Man |
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![]() ![]() This made me smile :) Is it wierd I thought of Stiles Stilinski when I read Landon Stiles? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWW! This was one of the cutest readings ever! And I love coffee and I love the setting, the story, and Landon. (Ah, Landon. How can you not love him? Even the name spells out amazing-ness) and the ending made me so happy. I just want to read more! |
![]() ![]() This story was simply amazing ! Continue pleaseeeee. I want to know more! :) |
![]() ![]() Simple yet sweet and cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really sweet story and i really loved the ending! |
![]() ![]() awwww so cute! |
![]() ![]() That was undeniably cute and I can picture exactly what every character looks like without having any major physical descriptions, so thanks for leaving it up to the imagination :)...Anne and Landon's both remind me of people that I know, so they were realistic and the story was just lovely...keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made my day :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW freaking awesum totally loved i dnt know dis had a special factor in it dan other one-shots i have ever read god bless .:) |
![]() ![]() That was a very cute story. Landon was really nice. I'll look at your other stories after this review. I had one problem with it (and I really don't want this to seem mean- criticizing because I like it) and that was that I think you tried a bit too hard to make the characters come off as good people. Prepping up Landon didn't go over badly (with you mentioning holding the door open and everything.) when you prepped up the girl though it was a bit too dramatic- with the old couple but mostly with the homeless person. It just got slightly unrealistic. Once again, please don't take offence from this- I really did like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, I liked it. It was cute! Although at the end I found myself saying "that's it?" It was quite abrupt! I still like it though, well done! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this is so cute! I have a total thing for people getting together because of coffee shops or elevators. I was glad he got her something sly as a card, making her think that he might have forgotten her birthday. Love the story! *Ngoc1231* |
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![]() ![]() I like this piece of writing. Thanks for sharing it. Wouldn't mind for an extra story though ;D |