Reviews for i never wanted a pony
continuous brevity chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
this is fantastic
electrical moon chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
This is really lovely! I love the mentions of stars and scribbling your lonely heart out. Also 'i'm cannibalistic enough to chew them to shreds' and the miracle lines. Great!
whisper queen chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
never wanted a pony either. fucking scary, that's what they are.
WordsTasteLikeCaramel chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I really love the second stanza, it's so relatable. I see so many people on this site try to convey wistful ponderings, of wanting someone and being lonely, but the feelings sometimes become blurry throughout the poem. This one doesn't do that and I find myself really loving every word- it doesn't ramble. It doesn't try too hard and it doesn't bog us down- it shows us. And I love that. I really do.
especially these lines: "because i'm cannibalistic enough/to chew them to shreds.
and most starry nights/i'm either asleep/or scribbling my lonely heart/ out while sitting/on my bed sheets."
Punslinger chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
This seems more wistfull than tragic or shocking, like
your other memory poems. I'm left with the feeling that the litle girl can still look to the future with hope.
aria's melody chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
beautiful. just really beautiful ;)
I am Sadie Eye of Isis chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
I like it :) very flowing in a sort of poetic way, it has very good rhythm