Reviews for Nothing but Trouble
hirokiri9 chapter 16 . 2/21/2014
this is such an amazing story! Please keep up the hard work! XD
Aretice N. Treader chapter 16 . 9/30/2013
This was an okay chapter. There were cute parts here and there. I think it might be better if you wrote, "Grinning, he released her and gave her a gentle shove..."
Aretice N. Treader chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
I don't have much to say about this chapter, but that I don't if it should be "Cole observed the two from where he was on line buying a pretzel" or that Cole was in line.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 14 . 9/21/2013
Kayla actually seems like a decent girl. Trevor is confusing me, though, because I don't quite understand why he slightly opened up to Nicole.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 13 . 9/21/2013
It might just be me, but I didn't feel the awkwardness, save for the times when it was pointed out. But otherwise, it was written really well.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 12 . 9/21/2013
Cole's character is written very well. He's determined enough to wait for Nicole, but he's flawed enough to still seem like he could actually exist in real life.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 11 . 9/21/2013
Cole's and Nicole's relationship seems more like a friendship to me, though they were technically on a date. Plus, I still don't like Cas and Trevor together.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
I don't like the new development between Casandra and Trevor. It doesn't sound like it'll turn out very well.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 9 . 9/7/2013
I find Cole very forgiving... and very determined. Gotta give him credit; most guys would blow off a girl who ditched them for another. I pity Nicole, losing her phone and all.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 8 . 9/7/2013
I don't necessarily agree with the way Nicole left Cole to find Brody, but awkward situations make for awkward escapes. By the way, the second-to-last line had a couple of mistakes. I think you meant line of vision and the fourth wall.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 7 . 9/6/2013
I can sort of relate to Nicole, what with one of my closest friends pairing me up with almost any guy I happen to talk to. I also like the fact that Brody isn't resentful towards Abby for keeping him from an average teenage life.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/6/2013
I like the way that Nicole and Brody have the yes-no question conversations. Though, I have to say, I've played basketball in middle school, and even though we were definitely not the best team out there, we did tend to score more than just 9 or 10 points. But maybe we played differently; I don't know.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 5 . 8/24/2013
You sure know how to pick your endings. There was a spelling error, but it's not a big deal.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
I'm not a huge fan of Casandra and Trevor, but I do like the humor in the beginning of the chapter.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
I really like the plot for this story. You typed the word "see" twice in the beginning, by the way.
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