Wow, so many candidates for the heroine, can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon. With Extra cheese

This is a very entertaining read. I'm looking forward to more :)

I like Leigh's spunkiness, it makes her super awesome and unique. She does not take crap from people. I do think that she kind of has a huge ego, which the guys in this story has two. It makes me worrisome if she ever gets with anyone, how they will have to learn to compromise and get along together. I guess that may take a while to happen, since she is so insistent to not date of the guys here. I find it weird that she is allowing Josh to take her out for ice cream. It sounds like a date.

This was very funny, and I liked the flow of the story. It sounds exactly like one of my best friends talking to me, and Leigh acts like one of my friends, too, which gave the story a sense of familiarity. There is a bit of stereotypical teenage-girlness to it, though, which I didn't like as much. I didn't not like it completely, but I wasn't a big fan.

I do think that you could lay off on the parentheses. Several of them would have done just fine with a comma or two. Other than that, it was great.

PLEASE CHANGE LEIGHS NAME TO ALEIGHA!

Interesting choice of main character. I don't read too many romance stories told from a stuck-up character's perspective. Technically, that's a point for originality. I love Leigh's smart-mouth comments, especially during the parts with Stella.

"What's an IQ? Is that, like, some sort of water fairy? Because everyone knows that fairies are, like, so last season."

That line was hilarious, as was Leigh's referring Stella's nails to talons.

The story is great so far. Look forward to the updates. The story is now on my Follow list.

The beginning was really interesting. I was sucked into it. Great start to this chapter! It also says a lot about Leigh's character. [I didn't look at the speaker, assuming it was just another wimp trying to get in good with one of the A-listers. "Shove off, loser," I said in a bored tone,] We know that Leigh is really arrogant and narcissistic. Her usual response to people is, "shove off!" and I like how you pointed out her character here. Actually, I really like her character. For some reason, when the main character is self absorbed like that, it's really interesting and unusual, not really something you see everyday, right? I really like the thought put into Leigh's character.

[ "Denial's not just a river in Egypt, hon."] LOL THAT WAS MY FAVORITE SENTENCE THIS CHAPTER. Man, your dialogue is fantastic as always. [With that, and an artful flip of my hair, I sashayed away.] I BURST OUT LAUGHING AGAIN. LOL SASHAY? THAT'S SO CLICHED.

This story is so unique. Instead of your typical romance, you get this girl, who says every thing on her mind and is narcissistic, then you have this boy who she annoys the hell out of. It's pure genius, I haven't seen anything like this before! Well done!

[I flashed him a confident smile to cover my slip-up up ] Noticed that mistake.

Wah, well that was a good chapter! I was laughing my head off, and I was having a great time! It was really enjoyable and I'm looking forward to more by the end of the chapter. I'm wondering how this relationship will work out, but at the same time, I'm not too worried about it. Everything is fine the way it is, and it's not really one of those pairings that you /obsess/ over, you know? I'm not sure if that is a good thing or a bad thing about your story. It's just... a fact. Or an opinion, depending how you look at it.

[ "Jeesh, you must really like ice cream,"] I don't know if jeesh is even a word. Jeez and geez and sheesh are words, but jeesh JUST LOOKS WEIRD. LOL It's not even a big deal, though.

ANYWAY, keep it up! I love it! Actually, this perked me up quite a bit, and I feel energized enough to continue working on Wasteland. You stories make me so happy. :D Yay, happiness. Keep it up!

Ohhh! Cool! I like!

Whoa Josh.
Whoaaa.
Mood swings much?
AND I KEPT LAUGHING AT DENIAL! LOL. I kept doing this:
"Denial.. Deh Nial. De Nile. The Nile! BAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"
I like this story, but how Josh changed his mood so much is just . . . Odd. Like, I'd assume he's using her or something, since earlier, he was glaring at her, and the next thing, they're friends.
Leigh should take her FRIEND relationships a bit more serious, because they seem to like her a lot.
Like Hayden, Kayla and Lucas.
Sometimes, I really do think Leigh should think more before being such a jerk. What made her act that way?
Later on in the story, you should show why Leigh's not committed.
A full out legitimate reason.
Make it believable.
But please include that later on in the story, not the next chapter.
I hope this one flows more.
Have Josh and Leigh spend a LOT more time together BEFORE they open up.
And TRAVIS AND HELENA were the names zaria and I were going to use for the new story. Omgomg pm me and I'll tell you there.

Hey good story! :D :D

I'm sorry for popping up everywhere... :X
You said 'heard' twice :D
Uhm, I like this story.
But... I like all of your stories (:
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You seem very productive in writing. But somehow I feel you are narrowlly stay on the same subject-romance. Maybe expand a little more of your day to day activities you will find more interesting things to write?
just a thought.

This is so funny! PLEASE update :)

Hmmm... an interesting start. Your main character seems a tiny bit superficial, but I think that's just because it's only the first chapter so far, and also, in part, because of her interactions with her friends in this first chapter. I definitely appreciate her candor, and it's nice to see a main character who seems so self-possesed, but I also hope she starts treating her relationships (and not just romantic relationships) with other people more seriously. Anyway, good luck with your writing; I'll be waiting for an update!