Jude—he's a cute addition to the story, I'll give you that. I remember him from chapter one; I did like him then, too, but I assumed that a name would never be put to the face.

I wouldn't make Jude end up with Leigh, if I were you. I mean, he is four years younger than her AND autistic. It seems rather unlikely, isn't it? Pretty and popular senior girl, attractive autistic freshman boy. I can't see that working, especially since Jude is Josh's younger bro. Up to you, though.

Is this review too long? I expect I'm boring you by now; I'm rather boring myself. Sitting in a college dorm, staring at the MacBook screen. Can't be good for my eyes, I tell you. : P

FrigginPinkUnicorns

I particularly liked your ending, actually. It was very straight and to the point, but there seemed to be a hint of underlying turmoil in it. Good job on that.

More of Josh—excellent. I didn't have a lot to go on him last chapter, but now I think I understand a little bit more about him. He seems too perfect, almost, besides the part when he's nervous about talking to Leigh. Good show of emotion, there, by the way.

I did like the line that you used with Leigh on Stella—"Denial's not just a river Egypt." Clever, and quite funny. You've got a good grip on being humorous, I like it. Your lines are all sarcastic and witty, which is quite common these days among teens like us. Good call!

FrigginPinkUnicorns

Nail polish remover... Ha, that's so random. It's a good start to your story, actually. You portrayed Leigh's character quite well: She's one of those uncaring, "slutty" girls who doesn't quite care about her reputation.

Josh seems like the typical cliche school jock, but that's alright, I suppose. If cliches weren't common, then I guess they wouldn't be cliche in the first place. And it does seem that an overload of football players are handsome, yeah?

I like your dialogue. It's very smooth and witty, much like the typical high school tongue. Usually, you'd expect more expletives from your average teenager, but I understand that you're trying to keep the cussing to a minimum. It can be quite hard, though, especially when you're trying to portray emotion.

Keep it up! I really like it, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from this story!

FrigginPinkUnicorns

Love it gotta kep writing!

WHOOO! Best ever! Aden all the way! LOLLL, you can tell how devoted I am, it's Christmas! Xoxo #1 fan

Yeah, it really has been a long time, hasn't it? Lol. But wow, this is awesome. I love the glimpses into Leigh's past and stuff with Aden. I want more!

Update soon, please cuz I'm gonna die if you dont

omg PLEASE UPDATE THAT WAS AWESOME!

I actually really liked this chapter... I loved seeing the flashbacks about Aden and I guess we kind of get a look inside Leigh's mind. It has been a while, though - that I agreed with. Throughout the chapter I was trying to remember who was who! Anyways, I can't wait until the truth all comes out! And I hardly believe that Jessamine would hate her. Enough people dislike her right now, but she needs to suck it up and apologize already!

Aww, that's so cute! The Aden and Leigh thing, u mean. And omg, Josh is so totally jealous! Figure it out already, Leigh! Heah, it's awesome though. Update soon!1

I wasn't sure if I would like this story at first, but now I'm kind of hooked. I won't go so far as to say that I don't like Leigh, but certain aspects of get character get on my nerves. On the other hand, I do like that she's independent and assertive and that she has a mysterious past that really intrigues me. I want to know what happened with her and Aden! I also noticed that you haven't mentioned anything, or at least not much, about her family. Just an observation.
My favorite character is probably Jude. He's so snarky and interesting. I'm really curious about his relationship with Josh and why it seems so strained. Also, Jude doesn't seem to have many autistic tendencies, apart from the fact that he's kind of anti-social.
I'm still rooting for Leigh and Josh, though I like Jude better.
My other favorite character is probably Jessamine. She seems very nice and friendly, totally different that the stereotypical cheerleader.
This is probably the longest review I've ever written. Keep up the good work!

Wooh! New chapter(: Pshh, Josh is obviously jealous. C'mon Leigh, how do you not see? But anyway, I realized you have many J- names haha. And I think this chapter was pretty good. I like how there were so many characters here. I'd almost forgotten about Leigh's other friends. And they're cool, so I wouldn't wanna do that. Curious! Want to know more about Leigh's past! Lookin' forward to the next chapter!

You're really good at making conversations interesting, and dragging them out. This must have been at least 3 k words!
This line I thought was funny:
A few seconds later, she said, "That paper's from sophomore year, Leigh."

Ah. Ha, ha . . . That worked, too.
I liked it a lot. Sorry for not reviewing the rest of your chapters, but I just wanted to read! Update soon, please.

:O...Travis. And josh. Whoa. And Jude, too :P
I like it

I think I really like Jude. He seems cute and nice but too young for Leigh :P so you should probably pair her up with josh or Travis.
Good chapter! Update soon!

Wow. I think I like this chapter better than the first which might not be good because you want to have a good hook. Lotsa people drop off after chapter 1. Just advice, tho!