Reviews for Abandon
skye real chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Ooh I am looking forward to pay back time :-) I hope you update soon!
MayallaHedgie chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
You can find me on here under this name if you want to answer I'm just too lazy to log in XD this is great. I would love to read it with him in charge ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Something that annoyed me was that you didn't pay attention to details. For example, you don't mention her taking off his blindfold and somehow they're gazing into each others eyes... And you could've had a little sexy scene of her taking off his cock ring... Just saying that details like those not only help to keep the reader from being confused by can also add strength to the story.
Anon chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
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