Reviews for House of Fear
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
This poem leaves me speechless, for the fact that's beyond exceptional. It has so much emotions written into it, and I can relate my hear out to it. The flow of the poem and it's format is amazing. Outstanding job, keep it up :D
theshadow603 chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Cobwebs cover spider-infested, stone walls
Cracked and crumbling, the once mighty castle breaths
Sickly green moss crawls over them, those walls, vines sprawled
:)
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
haunting, very good work! keep it up! anything that gives you that creepy feeling down your spine is dang good writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
I apologized. And Im still sorry. Why no forgiveness? God, and his son are forgiving. I cant tell u how sorry I am, I almost threw up, and cried because im so sorry. Please just forgive me, Im sorry I hurt you...