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Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Why does pirates come to mind when I read this? :) excellent imagery, as always! Love it :)
knownkonvict chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Beautiful. I love the truth in the line 'live to always fear the end'
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
After reading the last line I found it more happyish. It's a short poem but each line has different layor to it. "Hollow out the whole blue sky," that line is powerfull start it opens it up really strongly and I get this strong sense of emptiness. Yet the next two lines "Chase away the moon, Live to always fear the end" the emptiness from the beginning is gone and it's about having no fears. "Let your paramours swoon over you,Scar the stars and hum your hate," I don't understand the word paramours but the next line goes more about living on the edge. The last line "Your ship has sailed and you hate to wait." to me means that you shouldn't have to ever pretend to be fearless just dive off the edge because life isn't gonna wait for you if you're to weak to move on. I love this poem btw!