|Reviews for Two Inches|
| Anihyr Moonstar chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
I love your narrator right off the bat, but I start to love him more and more as I read. Like, first paragraph, I liked him; second paragraph, moreso. By the time he told me the notebook he was writing in wasn't his, I laughed out loud.
Ohhh, that poor boy. I should not have laughed as often as I did, except that this is classified as humor, not horror, so maybe I'm granted all the chuckles and laugh out louds I had. Very, very nice. Great work all around! Very rare that I find a first person narrative that I find that engaging, humorous, and "believable". (I mean, the story's crazy, but it SOUNDS like a kid going through exactly the situation he describes.) Keep it up. :)
| Ian McF chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I know it would be more constructive if I gave actual criticism, but there is really nothing wrong with this story. It was funny, an enjoyable read, and decent length. I'd definitely read more of like matter from you if I see it. Good job.