Nice one, except the mistake i told you about before :)

hey author i loved it if u ever need help with names just talk to me and this is one of the most intresting things ive evre read soo keep it up and i hope you create more and more because i will defo be reading them.

Really good for rookie ! nicely done peggs i love it x

I like it a lot :) It seems pretty formal but I like it. I can't wait to read more :)