|Reviews for Across The Border|
| Aletiah chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Okay, so I had to read this because you said in the summary Elliot wents to a school in Sweden, and I am swedish :) I don't live in Stockholm though, but I've been there a couple of times.
I can tell you use some kind of translate-site for the swedish, because it's not quite right, but I guess it doesn't matter since most of the people who reads here doesn't know swedish anyway :)
(But for example, "mor" is the old word, no one use it, "mamma" is much better or, if it's a youth who says it, "morsan".)
| A Serendipity chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Really looking forward to the next chapter!
| Flamepetal chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
need another chapter there fefe 3 lol
| Dark shadows chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Ohhh wow ! I really can't wait to know more about Elliot and davin! keep up the good work and I can't wait until chap 2 comes out ahh