Reviews for Loss and Gain
Kilian Grey chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Well written and a very good story. Enjoyed it.
Cynthia Brent chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
This is an amazing story! I can't believe no one else has reviewed this. There were so many things I liked about it. The narrator describes things really well. The characters are all guys and you make them sound totally real and totally like real boys. The descriptions of the woods and the vegetation are totally believable. Eddie the narrator is such a nice person, but not too good to be true. The way he goes along at first but later stands up for himself is really well desribed and believable. I could really imagine you writing a longer story about these characters some day!