|Reviews for Fuck You a love poem|
| dances on echoes chapter 1 . 5/11
I adore the first two lines, the idea of tearing yourself from want is incredible
| MAB chapter 1 . 1/29
I feel so much like that and have since I have been 17 and I'm now 57.
| smoke another grin chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Absolutely incredible. All the little details and actions and objects just made the emotions slide out of the beautiful words themselves and float to where I could feel them perfectly. The poem was simple, and yet multi-faceted; it captured my feelings better than I would've been able to. And more and more.
The resigned calm with which the narrator decides to leave herself behind to escape old love is bittersweet and quietly heart-wrenching. The words, the flow, the clash of hope and sorrow - I loved it all.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
I felt as if I should toss my hands in the air and say YES! Damn right!
Thank you for sharing.