Reviews for Losing the other Half
xXMERPXx chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
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tragicallyamore chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
so i take it they are staying there? you did a really nice job with this very easy to read no gramatical mistake ;) lol feel bad for those poor girls. i knew someone in a position very similar
Jinspire chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Such detail. I've been blown away, off to the depths of the Milky Way. ;-; Anywho, yeah... It is wonderfully awesome. But, there was a spelling error here, most likely a typo: "MAya" Otherwise, all is fine. Once again, the chapters could be longer, but since there is such good prose here I'm gonna just shut up and take what I can get.
Nice summary too, imo. Brief and to the point, while explaining the plot in a simple way.