Reviews for Emergence
LM4E chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
A lot of imagery in here. Not gonna lie, I wasn't really following but I could tell it meant something and your choice of words really were beautiful :) keep writing!
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
It was good, but there's one mistake I think needs fixing? The last line says "reacting into teenage, elemental." I think you need to add or subtract something? If it isn't, sorry. I'm a 'tard, anyway.

-Hermie