Reviews for Love is Blind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really cool story! |
![]() ![]() If the actual story is 29,325 words, then that means you have 2K worth of AN's, lol. You probably did better than I would though. (I know this is old but) Great story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you are going to have a memory of the last thing you saw, at least it should be a good one. Pretty blue eyes would be a nice memory. I forgot to review the last chapter. The dream was interesting... are they somehow joined at a psychic level? Another question: why do the popular kids act so odd toward Anna? Is there something in her past or in her appearance? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your opening chapter has created a lot of speculation in my mind about what, exactly, is wrong with Anna's family. It seems like the mother rules the roost and is not the good mother that she tries to project... but what is the real situation? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It needs and epilogue! I need to see their future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know what to say. You are an amazing author, and your characters and plot line... I am so jealous |
![]() ![]() idea for a sequel- they meet back up and he acts like he cant see then in an emotional scene. he admits he had eye surgery and has been able to see her since he saw her the second time |
![]() ![]() Oh my god. This is absolutely flawless. I would die for a sequel... Is there any chance? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You just cant end the story here, please! I beg you, write a prologue with anna's and louis's reencounter. It sureƱy wou.d be beautifull and touchy... Just like this last chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you doing a sequel? Because this has to be my favorite story so far. I absolutely adore it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH HOW DARE YOU! WHY send him away, I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE HIM GAHHHH! |
![]() ![]() Well, that was good read. Not bad. The story timeline was only two months? That seems like a lot to cover. I think it could have been a bit longer, but it is actually quite long, so no real complaints here. Good job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1 word- sequel. And if you need any ideas, my mind is freaking buzzing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now I want a sequel! An Anna-hunts-down-her-boyfriend-to-the-ends-of-the-earth type thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest, I wasn't sure how I liked your story at first. I think it's a little fast, a little rush, and a little vague. Definitely enough to intrigue me, but I feel like there's not enough "meat on the bone" at first. But What really got me was the very end of this chapter."Your eyes are the last thing I saw," he said. "They're the last things I will ever see, ever." Totally killed me. I gave out a little cry. That hooked me. I think if you pump a little more into the content leading up to meeting with Louis, it'll be awesome. It's a great start! |