Reviews for Mask
ygg chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Very powerful and full with emotions. The agony of living with masks becomes very tangible in your poem. It is a topic which is often used in poetry here on FP. Well written! Keep writing :-)
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
This is a very true poem. One that I could relate to. Maybe even others as well. I found it amazing how you expressed this much power and emotions in a haiku, doing a 5,7,5. Normally something like this would need a continuation of words, yet it seems like you effortlessly managed to get straight to the point and allow your feelings out. Outstnading job, keep it up :D