|Reviews for The Glasses of Time|
| Snowflake Bunny chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
You know, you're not as bad as you think you are. This is actually really good. I found a little spelling mistake though in your second line. Instead of 'The land laid out is not to fair', I think it should be 'The land laid out is not /too/ fair'. I love how you've put so much detail into this poem. It makes it really easy for me as the reader to see what you were seeing when you wrote this. Great job!