|Reviews for Fiery Shadows, Watery Lights|
| Oci Oceana chapter 13 . 2/19
Oh my! This has gotten so exciting! I can't wait to see where you'll take it!
| SkullszEyes chapter 13 . 2/17
Well that was quite the turn, finding out she isn't their kid. Cool.
Another awesome chapter. :)
| SkullszEyes chapter 12 . 2/17
Very fluffy moments between these two characters.
| SkullszEyes chapter 11 . 2/17
Sentiment is alright. :)
| SkullszEyes chapter 10 . 2/17
I like where you're going with this. :)
But I kinda of wish there was more description.
That's all I'm saying. :P
| SkullszEyes chapter 9 . 12/25/2013
Your chapters are very fast paced.
| SkullszEyes chapter 8 . 12/25/2013
I like the ending. Very mysterious.
| SkullszEyes chapter 7 . 12/25/2013
| Crystallea1321 chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
Hahaha! I like the end. That is so her. Anyways, great job, waiting rather impatiently for the rest.
| TristeAlma chapter 6 . 7/15/2013
i still hope we figure out the background of how they figured out who they were...what the prophecy is... and all of that jazz in the 'kingdom' versus 'in the villages' and why the king hates them, etc.
love your story so far! update soon :)
| TristeAlma chapter 5 . 7/15/2013
okay ... woops, now i see. dawn and river have different parents... i got confused when he said 'she was found at the same time'
i'm deathly afraid of blue tennis balls lol
great chapter. poor dawn... it sucks being in love w/ someone who has no clue. lol
| TristeAlma chapter 4 . 7/15/2013
hmmm so it seems that ember is w/ dawns parents and dawn and river are with embers parents while drake got left in the forest... so now i'm kind of seeing what kind of 'universe' this is... but still need more answers! LOL
| TristeAlma chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
see... what is this apprenticeship all about? does her family know? hmmm...
| TristeAlma chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
blake sounds interesting...but again more questions...like where is he going? and how did he and the others find out about their 'gifts.'
| TristeAlma chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
very nice intro... i have so many questions that i want answered... which is going to make me want to keep reading... signs of a good story!