It feels like some of my own opinions and thoughts were just thrown in my face. The wording for this was excellent, it had a great impact. I am becoming a huge fan of your writing ;)

Hm, interesting...oddly, I somewhat like it that's it's an altenate ending for some reason. You're able to make this in good use of a different ascept from writing a tragedy scene, and surprisingly though it was short, I think it's very good. Keep it up-! I look forward on you posting CB soon :)