Reviews for Is this too close?
hecountedstars chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
this is beautiful and i adore it - all the hesitation and carefulness, the way you use "gathers" where anyone else might use tugs or pulls, the strange charged mood. it's lovely.
True Talker chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Okay, while reading this it had made me think about things and I was in awe by what I had read. Thank you for sharing this.
Cathy Casam chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Cool, real cool. Short and cute, and sort of funny. I loved the way you began this story. "I had to pee" haha. But be careful with the tense, and um, well I'm pretty sure this is not poetry. Still I really, really liked it. It's a really cool story, and well, yeah, that's all.