This is an intriguing story, thank you.

Please continue this story. It is very interesting and I want to find out what Angel does in the future.

It too short but your story is great... AMAZING i just wish it long e.g like a chapter where Angel has a baby and all

I love stories about Scots and this is one of the best. The man is one charming Scot and will make a fine husband.

I love it! You've stuck to their accents and showed their true emotions. Angel annoys me and I guess that's your goal to do by the end of the chapter, what with her abrupt change from kissing Damian* and then hating him.
It's realistic... To an extent and I like that

Update soon

Great update, so happy to see Angel warm up to Damian

I love the picnic idea! Awesome chapter!

awwwww what a sweet chapter! I loved it! great work :)

'Course you deserve us. You write an amazing story, you get amazing readers:)

I hope Angel comes to see the reality of her so called love and marriage to Steven (who I totally hate and think is a complete jerk for hurting Angle and using her in such a way!)
Great update! Loved the new chapter (:

Great chapter. You explained Damian's part well and his frustrations I almost reached the point of wanting to hit her myself. Damian and Maggie's conversation was good since she really explained to him the mood swings Angel experiences during pregnancy. I just hope that they sort through their differences with the baby on the way soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.

still stuck. thanx for the update

ooh! very interesting! cant wait to find out more info about damian! update soon

Awww, poor Angel. She just wanted a child...