Reviews for Mortal worlds
DarkAngelGal chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Hey, my name's Lauren! lol! Btw...when there's dialogue...keep it seperated from the rest of the paragraph. It will look better. And could you add more details. Other than that, great start!
-DarkAngelReviews
P.S. Is there Angels in your story? lol!