Reviews for mortality
Amy B. R. Mead chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
It's impressive how you can tell a story in so few words. Very powerful. Good job :)
Ygg chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
The last line is haunting as it effectively ties with the title. Well done!
Bluebee chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I like how it is so simple yet so meaningful. Really Good Work :)
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
It's amazing how, it's only 14 words, yet it tells a whole story. :)

-Hermie

P.S. As I tell people, you don't need to return the favor, I only like helping people. And, I realize it's a bother to return the favor, especially when you're on an even tighter schedule than usual.