Reviews for mortality
French The Llama chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
I LOVE your haikus. You have such a voice, and in so few words you pack such an emotional punch. I connect to every one and yet each haiku is so short. And it's amazing how you connect the summary/title and the actual haiku. It helps the poem come out but doesn't give it away.
Amy B. R. Mead chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
It's impressive how you can tell a story in so few words. Very powerful. Good job :)
ygg chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
The last line is haunting as it effectively ties with the title. Well done!
Bluebee chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
I like how it is so simple yet so meaningful. Really Good Work :)
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
It's amazing how, it's only 14 words, yet it tells a whole story. :)


P.S. As I tell people, you don't need to return the favor, I only like helping people. And, I realize it's a bother to return the favor, especially when you're on an even tighter schedule than usual.