Reviews for Returning
Lady Seratopia chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
I like the rhyming. Poignant piece
AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I love this poem! It's great and it rhymes and everything! (I find a lot of poetry on here is like free verse or whatever it is called. I tried it myself but prefer to rhyme :D )

I like the descriptions and the metaphors, in particular the line which says "Not aged, but young and old" and also "Your hands are red, and no longer soft, they are soaked with the blood which you cannot wipe off" - Awesome imagery! :D

Well done!